Feedback On Our First Draft

• they liked the Llena de plena music
• the way our titles appeared - number plate, under the tire, over the steering wheel and bonnet
• we need to make rahibs voiceover louder
• we need to add our production company logo
• add roles in the group - directed by, written by, edited by...
• change the colour of the title to make it stand out
• add a type of magnet- the colours on the writing or picture
• the class thought that we could use a spilt screen when kate and aiden walk towards the camera together

• another thing they suggested was to include little snippets of extra footage when Aiden talks about his list of things he needs to be popular,   "1. Dress nice. Good clothes are essential. 2. Be funny . nobody will care if you can’t make them laugh.  And 3. Have a girlfriend. You need to have constant  gossip 24/7 otherwise your celebrity status wont exist." for example add in a clip of him in different clothes and add in a snippet of people laughing and gossiping.